so this is the first part of My new story. I want to see if it is any good. so if you can read it and tell me what you think that would really help!




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Have you ever thought that you were different, that you were meant to be something else? Have you ever taken action on that though? I have, and that action has changed my life, this is my story telling you about that action and what it led to. My name is Shane, My real name is Abby, well it was Abby but not anymore, My mother died when I was five, I went to live with my dad, ever since then my life has been different, my dad never wanted a girl and after a year it was like he never had one. I was living in a house full of guys the rest of my life, after four years of that you learn to live and act like a guy, my friends never noticed I was a girl, no one did, I was just like one of the guys, I was in sports, I had girls fawning over me, and I was always known as “that hot mysterious guy that all the girls stare at, I never got it, it is not like I don’t look like a girl, well I guess if you act like a guy and look like a guy, people will call you a guy. So here I am with my friends, school if finally over and now I learn that life will be heading in a new direction all because of my summer.